Antigone Cadmus

This is pretty good, if not a bit cliche. June (Springrain) has already pointed out spelling errors. I agree, the ending is a bit abrupt. Another thing: The word "relationship" ...

These are nice photos. I looooove black and white. First photo: I really like this picture. I like the fact that she's buy the water. It makes it more depressing. ...

Wow. I can't really give any negative critique on this. This is absolutely amazing. Your detail is beautiful. I love how you drew the scales on the dragon. Your proportions ...

Hey! I recently became an instructor. What do instructors do best? Review! I will review... Any genre. Seriously. On Poetry and Art I will very hesitantly review poetry. I am ...

Hey, Foxfire. This is really good. It's a liiiiitle too big. Can you cut the size down at all? The upside down-ness is a bit confusing as well. I really ...

Oooh, chapter three is up! Hey, you have less and less errors every time! Critique: Heh, that was the moment when I decided to write this book, despite it taking ...

Oooh, chapter three is up! Hey, you have less and less errors every time! Critique: Heh, that was the moment when I decided to write this book, despite it taking ...

Critique of the story: Honestly, what was the point of this? Are you going to post more, or is this it? Absolutely nothing happened. There was no plot or anything. ...

First picture: -I hate to be a broken record, but the picture really does need to be rotated. -I normally love black and white, but the contrast here is much ...

Yay! A horror story! Just a little critique: " You know what's weird?," Derrik asked, "He died yesterday and his mother said that's the last website he was on before ...

This is miles better than the first piece I read by you. It's very long... let's see how far I get... First of all. Communism? In Germany? Nah-uh. Germany was ...

Welcome to YWS! It's a great place to get critique for your writing, but you should critique other's writing as well! There is a 2:1 ratio- you should have 2 ...

1. I adore your guitar! Mine is so boring. 2. It's nice. :) 3. That's such a cool picture. It's really creative and I love the black and white. 4. ...

I agree with Ygaron. The molar thing was... weird. The way you write the cat's feelings is very creative and realistic. My only worry is it might become repetitive because ...

Wow, Vox. This is really powerful. You are a very talented writer. Just a few spelling errors. commiting suicide, fear of blassemphy Should be: committing suicide, fear of blasphemy Yeah. ...